Directions: Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) describe the diagram, and 2) give your

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问题 Directions:
    Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
    1) describe the diagram, and
    2) give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.

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答案 The pie chart shows students’ perception of their teachers. As can be seen, quite many students (57.9%) think that their teachers’ attitudes to them are mediocre. Only 21% of the students say they are relatively satisfied with teachers’ attitudes, while another 18% say dissatisfied. The remaining 3.1% think that their teachers are rather aloof to them. The survey results indicate that many teachers keep a certain distance from their students, who feel unregarded. In my opinion, teachers need to make some changes to establish a better relationship with their students. They could make the best use of social media to get into the student community. As we know, students of today spend quite a large amount of time in social media If teachers are members of the virtual community and get engaged in the online communication, it would help with a positive rapport between students and teachers. In short, it is time that teachers made some efforts to improve their images in students’ minds.

解析 该图表显示了学生如何看待老师。从图表可见,过半数学生认为老师对他们的态度一般。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
第一段描述图表。
第二段提出个人看法:建议教师使用社交媒体走进学生的世界,改善师生之间的关系。
第三段总结全文。
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