For this part, you are allowed SO minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Firecrackers Be Banned Completely? You should w

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问题 For this part, you are allowed SO minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Firecrackers Be Banned Completely? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.有人认为可以在春节期间燃放鞭炮
    2.有人认为应该完全禁止燃放鞭炮
    3.我的观点

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答案 A great many people prefer to set off firecrackers. Firstly, they regard it as a Chinese tradition to celebrate important festivals, associating lots of bangs of firecrackers with wealth, prosperity and good luck. Besides, it is believed that explosions from firecrackers can drive away demons or evils. Moreover, firecracker manufacturers and sellers can make a profit from it. On the contrary, the vast majority of people argue that firecrackers should be banned completely. First and foremost, it is dangerous to set off firecrackers, which would cause a lot of accidents and even put people’s life in great danger. What is more, the environment is greatly polluted by the loud explosion. Generally speaking, it is impossible and unrealistic to ban firecrackers for the time being, but some measures should be taken to lessen its bad effects. For one thing, the government should set strict standards for manufacturers to make smaller and less powerful firecrackers. For another, the designated areas and time limits for setting off firecrackers can never be ignored by the public.

解析     第一段提出有人倾向于在春节期间燃放鞭炮,因为这是中国人庆祝节日的一种传统方式,认为响亮的鞭炮声可以驱走恶魔带来好运.此外很多鞭炮生产商可以从中获利。第二句后半句associating lots of bangs of firecrackers with wealth,prosperity and good luck用分词短语构成复合句,表明原因。
    第二段阐述了另一种截然不同的观点,认为应该完全禁止燃放鞭炮,因为燃放鞭炮会导致很多事故,此外燃放鞭炮造成巨大的环境污染。本段用First and foremost,What is more引出原因,层次清楚。
    第三段表明自己的观点,即目前完全禁止燃放鞭炮是不可能也不现实的,但政府和公众可以共同努力把其危害降到最低。
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