The popularization of computers and Internet services has created a group of people called "indoorsy men" or "indoorsy women". T

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问题     The popularization of computers and Internet services has created a group of people called "indoorsy men" or "indoorsy women". They prefer to spend most of their time at home rather than go outdoors and have face-to-face contact with others. Should people choose to become indoorsy? The following are opinions from both sides. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and then give your view on the issue.
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    Yes:
    In recent years, with the popularity of the Internet, becoming indoorsy men or women is simply a choice of a different lifestyle for young people. In the past, if you want to buy something, you need to go out of your house, go to the store, and spend an hour or two choosing the products you want to buy. But now you can just sit in front of a computer and click your mouse, and the products will be delivered to you. Being indoorsy can help people save a lot of time.
    Being indoorsy allows people to think and work in a peaceful environment. For example, writers can be quite creative when they are alone at home without being interrupted.
    Being indoorsy does not mean that people will never go out of the door. Indoorsy men or women are good at making full use of modern technologies to facilitate their work and life.
    No:
    Some sociologists warn that the indoorsy lifestyle will make people self-centered and naive. If people stay at home for a long time, they will have little interpersonal contact with others. They will forget how to communicate face to face with others, and they may become shy, uncomfortable, or self-centered when they are involved in interpersonal communication in real life. This indoorsy lifestyle will have a bad effect on their normal interpersonal relationships and normal work.
    Indoorsy men or women spend most of their time sitting in front of computers, and they seldom engage in outdoor activities. Looking at the computer screens for a long time will do great harm to their eyes. Also, many indoorsy people seldom take part in sports. In the long run, their health will get worse.

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答案 Should We Embrace the Indoorsy Lifestyle? With the globalization of modern technology, especially the worldwide access to the Internet, people’s lifestyles have been greatly influenced. Some enjoy an indoorsy lifestyle. They hold that the indoorsy lifestyle is time-saving and peaceful. In contrast, those against the idea claim that keeping an indoorsy lifestyle will do harm to people both physically and psychologically. In my opinion, the indoorsy lifestyle has more disadvantages than advantages. On the one hand, people may be unwilling to communicate with others face to face when they choose the indoorsy lifestyle. They may become shy and uneasy when they have to involve in interpersonal communication in real life. On the other hand, the indoorsy lifestyle may have a bad impact on people’s health. Because indoorsy people often use a lot of mobile phones or computers and seldom take part in outdoor activities, it’s no doubt that their health will get worse in the long run. In conclusion, while enjoying all the benefits that the indoorsy lifestyle has brought to us, we should also step out of our houses and engage in the real world.

解析     本题讨论“宅”生活是否可取。在具体行文方面,考生应首先简要概述正方观点:“宅”是现代社会的一种新型生活方式,具有许多优点;然后概述反方观点:“宅”有种种弊端;接下来给出自己的观点,即“宅”生活弊大于利,并具体阐明理由;最后总结全文,重申观点。
    开头部分第一段首先介绍背景,然后概述正方观点:“宅”是当下网络时代出现的一种生活方式,可以节省时间并且很安宁;接着概述反方观点:“宅”生活会对人的身心健康造成不良影响。
    中间部分第二段首先明确地表明自己的观点:“宅”生活弊大于利。接着阐述两方面的理由:“宅”生活会导致人们不愿与他人面对面沟通,而且在现实生活中不得不与人交流时,人们会变得害羞和不安;“宅”生活会对人们的健康产生不良的影响。文中使用“On the one hand…On the other hand…”的结构阐述理由,层次清晰,条理清楚。
    结尾部分第三段重申观点:在享受“宅”生活带给我们好处的同时,还要多走出家门,多和外界接触。
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