For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Never Lose Confidence by commenting on the saying, "The onl

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled Never Lose Confidence by commenting on the saying, "The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today. " You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 Never Lose Confidence How important is confidence? According to the former US President Franklin Roosevelt, "The only limit to our realization of tomorrow will be our doubts of today. " In other words, if you have faith in your capabilities and future, it will make you one step nearer to your goal. For one thing, if you are a confident person, a stronger believer in your dream, you can easily attract people and persuade others to help you achieve your dream. That’s what Barack Obama did when he was running for the US presidency and what numerous people did before and after him in order to be successful. For another, when you have confidence, you can accomplish things even if others are not supportive. Such examples could be found among scientists and actors alike who proved themselves to the world finally despite the fact that they were previously misunderstood or wrongfully judged by others. Therefore, under no circumstances should one lose confidence, because it is what makes the dream come true.

解析     这是一篇议论文,主要讨论的是自信的重要性。
    第一段以How important is confidence?提出论点,紧接着引用美国前总统罗斯福的名言“实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑”开门见山地指出自信对成功的重要作用。一问一答,突出重点,自然而然写出自己的立场。
    第二段对引言进行评论,以递进的方式论证了自信可以为自己赢得支持,从而获得成功。一方面,自信的人相信梦想,很容易吸引别人并说服他们帮助自己实现梦想。奥巴马就是凭借着自信成功竞选美国总统,古来今往的无数成功者都是这么做的。另一方面,一个自信的人即使没有人支持也可以凭借自信实现自己的目标。许多不被人看好的科学家和演员向世人证明了自己。
    第三段总结全文。在任何情况下人都不能失去自信,自信照亮梦想。
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