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  3. Success and Persistence Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the

Success and Persistence Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the

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问题     Success and Persistence
    Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and
    3) give your comments.
   
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答案 In the picture, there are two miners. The one on the top is digging his way into a mine full of diamonds; the one at the bottom is actually giving up his endeavor, but just one step away from the treasure. The message implied in this picture is about the secret to success, which is persistence. Had the miner at the bottom persisted in his efforts a little bit longer, he would have been able to claim the enormous wealth. In my opinion, perseverance is indeed a proven way to success. But it’s a pity that we always easily get frustrated or desperate halfway because of difficulties and setbacks along the way. And we often abandon our goals prematurely, without doing our best. If, however, we stick to our goals, success is actually not very far away. For example, J. K. Rowling was impoverished when she was composing Harry Potter. She did not give up. Instead, she put all her energy into the only thing she loved—writing. Her persistence now rewards her with fame and wealth. From what has been discussed above, I think we must persist in our efforts if we want to be successful.
解析     这幅图片是一组对比图，上下分别是两个矿工。一个正在往钻石矿里面挖，另一个却离成功只差一点点就放弃了。根据这一思路，并按照题目要求，全文可以安排如下：
    第一段描绘图片，指出图片的意图：向读者传递“成功之道贵在坚持”的道理。
    第二段提出个人看法：坚持是成功之道。举罗琳的例子，阐述定下目标然后为之不懈奋斗的重要性。
    第三段总结全文。
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