For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name. You should write at least

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On the Importance of a Name. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.有人说名字(或名称)很重要
    2.也有人觉得名字(或名称)无关紧要
    3.我认为……

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答案 On the Importance of a Name It is widely believed that names play a significant part for both individuals and organizations. What’s more, a lot of attention is being drawn to the change of names. Many people strongly advocate it owing to the instruction of fortune-tellers, expecting the name would work its magic and bring a glorious future. However, as to whether a name deserves such attention, people’s ideas vary. On the one hand, some people hold that good names may contribute to their fame or fortune.On the other hand, a great many people insist that name is just a symbol, which is of little significance. They even go so far as to list some famous figures with ordinary names. As far as I am concerned, however, for the sake of success, more significance should be attached to intelligence, persistence and diligence rather than one’s name. Therefore, it is time that we put an end to this debate and put our mind to learning and working so that we may not one day discover that we have nothing but a point name.

解析     第一段指出,许多人认为名字不论对个人还是组织都起着重要的作用,很多人甚至热衷于改名。然而,对于这一现象,人们持不同的看法。第一句使用It is widely believed that句型点出目前热议的现象,接着在并列分句中使用What’s more进一步阐述该现象,使整个开头部分连贯、流畅。写作中要善于应用这种句型。
    第二段分别阐述为什么一些人认为名字重要,而另一些人则不看重名字。第二句使用which引导的非限制性定语从句,使句式富有层次。
    第三段给出自己的看法,即名字并不能带来成功和财富,我们应该看重的是智慧、毅力和勤奋。末句使用It is time that句型,并用so that引导随后的目的状语从句,具有一气呵成的气势。
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