Recently China Daily held a questionnaire in which whitecollars both in China and in Korea were asked whether they were happy or

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问题    Recently China Daily held a questionnaire in which whitecollars both in China and in Korea were asked whether they were happy or not, and the result was shown in the following pie charts. Study the charts carefully and write an essay in which you should:
   (1)describe the pie charts,
   (2) define what is happiness, and
   (3)state your position.
   You should write about 120 words and make full use of the information provided in the charts.

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答案 The charts above demonstrate the state of happiness among the whitecollars in China and Korea. Chinese whitecollars are comparatively happier than their Korean counterparts, which is indicated by the statistics 18.51% and 10.97%. However, in both countries more whitecollars still feel unhappy, which should arouse our social concern. Happiness can be defined in three basic ways. Firstly, good health itself is happiness. Without good health, we lose the ability to love our life and to contribute to our society. Secondly, performing what we enjoy is happiness. Choosing a job one is willing to dedicate his life to is critical to the feeling of happiness. Thirdly, to bring happiness to other people is happiness. Our own happiness derives from our willingness to bring others happiness. In short, happiness has a rich connotation which needs much of our reflection. In my view, we should not only bravely face tile difficulties and hardships of various kinds so as to keep a realistic attitude, but also keep an optimistic state of mind so as to see the bright side of our life and work. Only in these ways can we always feel happy.

解析    (ⅰ)这是一篇结合了提纲式作文特点的图表作文,含有两幅对比性的饼图。应把整个扇形内外提供的信息综合起来看,不但要描述清楚一个饼图,而且应当将两个图联系起来,加以比较分析。
   (ⅱ)审清提纲,按试题要求对图表进行描述,说明图表中反映的情况或对图表中显示印关系进行对比分析并做解释说明。
   (ⅲ)应对图表中的信息有所选择,抓住其中有代表性、有规律性的、对阐述写作主旨有用的典型数据,并在文章的结尾得出合乎情理的结论,阐明自己的看法。
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