For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 w

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese:
    假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸,就此写一份见证书。见证书必须包括以下几点:
    1.车祸发生的时间及地点
    2.你所见到的车祸情况
    3.你对车祸原因的分析

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答案 An Eye-witness Account of a Traffic Accident At about 7:00 in the morning of May 8 on my way to school, I witnessed a traffic accident. That morning I went to school by bike as usual, and suddenly I was startled by a screech of a car. 1 saw the car stopped in the middle of the street and a man lying in a pool of blood. I ran to the spot and more and more people gathered there. Someone called the police. Soon the police and the ambulance arrived. The victim was instantly sent to hospital and the driver was taken away. As for me. there are two possible reasons for the traffic accident. The first reason is that the pedestrian may walk across the street, paying no attention to the traffic light. The second reason is that the driver may drive too fast. Maybe they want to save time, but do remember, "More haste, less speed. " After all, life is the most precious.

解析     第一段简要交代目击车祸的时间和地点。
    第二段按照时间顺序描述车祸的情况,注意时态的正确使用以及长短句的交替使用。
    第三段从两个方面分析了引发车祸的原因。段落的整体框架借鉴了议论文列举理由的模式,从中可以看出夹叙夹议的影子,文章并非单纯的记叙文。本段第二句中paying no attention to the traffic light作句子的伴随状语,使段落紧凑。
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