For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Computers in Our Life following the outline given belo

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Computers in Our Life following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
   1.当今,计算机已进入千家万户。
   2.计算机给我们的生活带来了许多方便。
   3.但同时计算机也给我们带来了一些麻烦。

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答案 Computers in Our Life (1)Now, computers have entered millions of ordinary families.(2)Just a few years ago, to have a computer in a home was only a dream for most Chinese.(3)With the improvement of people’ s living standard, more Chinese can afford a computer. (4)There is no denying that a computer has brought a lot of convenience to our life.(5)With computers, we can find all information we want to know:(6)with computers, we can solve many complex calculations easily:(7)with computers, we can always find solutions to difficult problems.(8)In short, a computer has been used widely in our daily life. (9)With all these advantages, a computer also brings us some trouble.(10)For example, many employees might be laid off in that their work can be replaced by computers.(11)In addition, computer games have seriously influenced people’ s studies and health.(12)Furthermore, computers even bring some crimes, like hacker.(13)In conclusion, computers bring us numerous benefits, but we should not become the slave of it.

解析    第一段开门见山,指出随着生活水平的提高,计算机也已经慢慢普及。
   第二段讲述计算机给我们的生活带来了三大便利:搜寻信息方便化,复杂的计算简单化,解决办法全面化。
   第三段提出计算机带来的不便,如:电脑代替人脑,员工面临下岗;电脑游戏影响学习和身体健康;网络犯罪等。
(1)概述计算机现在已经进入千家万户。
(2)(3)分别讲了计算机过去和现在的使用情况。
(4)是此段的主题句,讲计算机带来了方便。
(5)(6)(7)紧接上句,给出了计算机的三个好处,进一步阐述主题句。排比的形式,使读者一目了然。
(8)总结计算机的好处,呼应此段的第一句。
(9)与前一段形成了对比,也是此段的主题句。
(10)(11)(12)进一步列举了计算机带来的麻烦。
(13)呼吁大家要合理地利用计算机。
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