For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled My Best Friend. You should write at least 120 words followi

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay entitled My Best Friend. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
    1. 你最好的朋友是个什么样子的人?
    2. 你们如何成为好朋友的?
                                    My Best Friend

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答案 I made many friends at university, but the friend I would like to tell you about is called Wang Ping. I met Wang Ping about two years ago at the university that we attended together, and we soon became friends. Our friendship has lasted to this day. Wang Ping is always friendly. She cares about her family and friends and is always willing to help others. I believe that Wang Ping has had a positive influence on my life since we have met. For example, I had much trouble with my English in my freshman year. Wang Ping helped me whenever she saw me frowning over my English exercise book. She told me many basic techniques to improve English and lent me many good books. By the end of the second semester, my English had improved a lot. So now you know why I regard Wang Ping as my best friend and will cherish our friendship forever.

解析     从题目要求来看,考生要写一篇描写人物的描述文。对一个人物的描写,其范围可以包括人物的面貌、性格、行为举止或思想感情等。本文着重描写了朋友乐于助人的性格特征,并举例证实。
    本文语言简洁、流畅,对朋友的描写能够专注于一点,深入下去。如第二段着重描写朋友乐于助人的性格。首先点出朋友的性格,然后举例,整个段落内容统一,没有其他赘言。
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