Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.

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问题     Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.
    You should include the details you think necessary.
    You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use " Li Ming" instead.
    Do not write the address. (10 points)

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答案 Dear Mr. President, As a student of this university, I would like to express my appreciation for your deep concern for us as always. Meanwhile, I feel obliged to make suggestions concerning how to improve students’ physical fitness. First, our university should have more sports facilities constructed to satisfy the needs of the students. Second, doubling the number of PE classes can, definitely, create more chances for exercising. Last but not least, electives on heath education should be offered to raise students’ health awareness and encourage them to exercise voluntarily. I will be grateful if my proposals are considered and positive changes take place in these regards. Yours sincerely, Li Ming

解析     写作指令要求考生就如何改善高校学生的身体状况向大学校长提出建议。因此信件应目的明确,内容简明扼要,语言正式并且委婉礼貌。从内容上来说,这一话题与校园生活密切相关,因此考生写起来有话可说。
    第一段:先对校长表示感谢,然后点明建议事由。
    第二段:结合自身实际,针对如何改善学生身体状况从两三个方面提出建议,如加强体育设施建设、开展及丰富体育活动、增加体育课时量等。
    第三段:套用经典句型结尾,表示希望建议被采纳或期盼回复。
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