The Importance of Diligence Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe

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问题     The Importance of Diligence
    Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) interpret its intended meaning, and
    3) give your comments.
   

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答案 As is vividly shown in the picture, there is a boy, whose head looks like a balloon floating in the air, which symbolizes his extraordinary talents. But he is actually chained to an enormous lead ball, which represents "laziness". The picture intends to raise the alarm to those gifted children that talent alone is not enough to guarantee a brilliant future for them. Being industrious is another key factor for success. In my opinion, hard work is like the engine of a car, which gives us sustainable power to move forward. Usually, hard-working people are more down-to-earth and are more patient. They would not rush themselves into anything. Instead, they are willing to spend time and energy on what they really care about, and opportunities often favor those who are prepared. For example, my roommates, Jack and Peter, both applied for a position as management trainee in a foreign company. Jack, who had great speech skills, did not prepare a single word for his interview. Peter, who was less confident, spent two weeks researching the information of the company. During the interview, Jack tried to sweet-talk the HR into hiring him, but Peter actually got the job offer because of his insightful understanding of the position. Clearly, hard work, though it takes some time, will reward us amply.

解析     这幅图片刻画了一名男孩天分极高,但是由于懒惰却无法“腾飞”。可见,不管天分多高,如果不加以努力也难以成才。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可安排如下:
    第一段描绘图片,指出图片的意图:光凭天分不足以取得成功,成功还需要勤奋。
    第二段提出个人看法:辛勤劳动就像汽车的引擎,给我们前进的动力。举两名室友为例,有天分而疏于准备与无天分而尽心准备,其结果是后者胜于前者。
    第三段总结全文:勤奋工作尽管要费些时间,但最终还是会给我们很大的回报
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