For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on obstacles by referring to the saying "Obstacles are things a pers

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on obstacles by referring to the saying "Obstacles are things a person sees when he takes his eyes off his goal." You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to overcome obstacles. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 There is a saying that goes, "Obstacles are things a person sees when he takes his eyes off his goal." Simple as it sounds, the intended meaning is more than profound. It is indicated in the quote that if we stick to our goal, we will triumph over any adversity and no longer see them as obstacles. For instance, I once had to make a tough decision after my failure in the college entrance examination: to accept what life throws at me or to try it again. Since college was my dream, finally I decided to do it again despite the prospect that I had to bear more pressure than ever. Life didn’t let me down again due to my determination and hard work. Adversity is a challenge for cowards but an opportunity for the brave. Therefore, every time adversity blocks my way, I always tell myself not to fear and keep reminding myself of where I am heading. Moreover, I will cope with obstacles by analyzing the problems and finding the solution to them. I have faith that I can overcome any obstacle and finally get to my destination.

解析     这是一篇名言分析型作文。首先要求考生就“当人的视线不放在目标上时,他就看到了阻碍”这句名言做出评论,提出自己的观点并举例加以阐述,最后说明能做些什么来克服阻碍。根据题目要求,文章的结构可安排如下:
第一段:简单引述名言:
第二段:论证名言,并举例说明;
第三段:讲述自己会怎样克服阻碍。
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