For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Unity Breeds Success by commenting on Albert Einstein’

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问题    For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Unity Breeds Success by commenting on Albert Einstein’ s famous remark "A snowflake is one of God’s most fragile creations, but look what they can do when they stick together! " You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 Unity Breeds Success It is universally acknowledged that the following words of Einstein are quite reasonable: "A snowflake is one of God’s most fragile creations, but look what they can do when they stick together! " Definitely, A snowflake is easy to melt when it lands on the soil. However, when falling on the ground together, they can create a snow-wrapped world with splendid scene. It is obvious that unity transforms snowflake’s vulnerability into strength. Simple as Einstein’s remark may sound, it contains abundant life philosophy and informs us of the significance of unity. What we firstly have to mention is that unity plays an indispensable role in recent style of working, namely team working, which will improve the efficiency of jobs. Secondly, with a growing number of people becoming united, the relationship between human beings will be better. From my perspective, at no time should we ignore the importance of unity. "Many hands make light work." John Heywood also once said. Accordingly, we should foster the consciousness of unity and always bear in mind that unity can create miracles no matter what obstacles we meet.

解析 第一段:阐述这句话的表面意思(what to do)。
第二段:揭示并论证这句话的深层含义,即团结的重要性(why to do)。
第三段:论述自己如何实践“团结是成功之母”这句话(how to do)。
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