Write a letter to the Office of Property Management of your community, to give your advice on how to improve community security.

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问题     Write a letter to the Office of Property Management of your community, to give your advice on how to improve community security.
    Write your letter with no less than 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
    Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead.
    Do not write the address.

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答案 Dear Sir or Madam, I greatly appreciate this survey organized by your Office. As a resident in this community, I am writing to contribute to the improvement of the community security. I commute to my downtown company from Monday to Friday. Most of the time, I am not at home. Therefore, it would be comforting if outsiders’ entrance to this community is strictly controlled. For example, security guards should ask outsiders to register and issue them with temporary entrance tags. I hope my advice would be of any help to your work and I am looking forward to seeing a safer community! Yours sincerely, Li Ming

解析 这是一篇典型的“分析+建议”型作文.要求考生向小区物业管理处写一封信,为如何改善社区治安献计献策。文章结构力求清晰明了、重点突出。根据题目要求,信件应当在开头点明写信目的;接着从社区居民的角度为如何改善社区治安提出自己的具体建议;结尾握出希望建议能被采纳,同时对社区治安进行展望。
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