Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) describe the diagram, and 2) give your comments.

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问题     Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
    1)  describe the diagram, and
    2)  give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.
   

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答案 The chart displays the projected trend of the aging population in China, As it shows, between the years 2010 and 2050, people above the age of 60 may experience the sharpest increase (19%), followed by the age groups above 65 and 80 years old (15% and 5% respectively). In the year of 2050, about 33% of the Chinese population would be 60 years old or above, while 24% and 7% of them would be 65 and 80 years old or above. The magnitude of the aging population in China is explicitly presented in the chart, which may bring lots of trouble to our society. The fact that aged people are dependants of their children means many couples have to provide for 4 seniors, adding to their already mounting pressure of life. The shortage of workforce in China will be another problem. To ease the burden brought by the aging population, the family planning policy needs reforming. Fortunately, our government has begun to do so already.

解析 该图表显示了2010—2050年中国人口老龄化的趋势。从图表可见,老龄化在三个组别均呈上升趋势,而60岁以上这一组别的上升最为迅猛。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:第一段描述图表。第二段指出人口老龄化带来的压力:很多夫妇要赡养4个老人,社会压力增大。第三段提出建议:调整计划生育政策,以缓解老龄化带来的各种压力。
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