Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Yo

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问题     Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
    1) interpret the chart, and
    2) give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.
   

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答案 The pie chart provides a summary of the respondents’ options concerning who to talk to when in trouble. As can be seen, 61% of them choose to talk with their friends and classmates, for the reason that they are of the same age and approachable. 22% report that they would talk to teachers and parents, because they are experienced in life and education. Still, 17% choose not to share their worries with anyone, because they are not willing to do so or find it hard to communicate with others. In my opinion, it is useful to note students’ different patterns of dealing with their worries. For teachers and parents, it is best to leave the choice to students, if they wish to keep their thoughts between their friends and classmates. Showing trust and respecting students’ ways of communication is actually helpful to ease their tension. However, when students are so protective of themselves that they do not want to share anything with anyone, timely intervention is a must.

解析 该图表显示了受访者有烦恼时会向谁倾诉及其理由。从图表可见,大部分受访者选择向同学、朋友倾诉。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:第一段描述图表。第二段提出个人看法:教师和家长应尊重学生的沟通方式,给予他们空问,这能有助于缓解各方面的压力。但是,如果学生太自闭,也需要适时干预。
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