For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write about Online Education. You should write at least 120 words following the out

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write about Online Education. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
1. 网上学刘已经走进人们的生活
2. 有人网—亡教育具有很多优点,但有人认为网上教育有很多缺点
3. 你的看法

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答案 With the wide application of the Internet, online education has attracted a lot attention. Some people predict (1) that this is going to be a revolution for learning because with this new model, learning can break through the limit of time and space (2). But not everyone thinks so (3). Critics (4) of online education insist that without face-to-face communication with fellow classmates and the teacher, those who study online can hardly be stimulated to form real deep thinking, thus the effect of learning is far from satisfactory(5). But in my opinion, online education is a blessing for all of us. First, there is a vast pool of information on the Internet. People can choose the right content for themselves based on their needs. So, in this sense, online education means a new choice for us. Second, for those professionals who would like to improve their knowledge and skills, the electronic classroom (6) is the best place since it saves time to travel to the classroom, which is needed by the traditional mode. On the whole, I think online education is promising (7) and will be a great help for those who are eager for knowledge.

解析     本文要求首先陈述两种不同观点,然后陈述个人观点。写作中可先确立基本写作框架。应试过程中不妨将自己熟悉的框架、句子搭好,再填入具体内容。最后注意添加逻辑连词。在写作过程中注意表示不同意见可用较新鲜的表达方法,以增加作文的亮点。
    1.此处用predict,是say的另一表达。
    2.break through the limit of time and space意为“打破时空限制”。
    3.此处“But not everyone thinks so.”起到承上启下的作用。
    4.critics表示“批评者”。此处避免了“But other people think…”这种表达。后者较常见,但不如使用critics地道。
    5.be far from表示远非……。
    6.此处用electronic classroom指网络环境下学习,避免重复使用online education。
    7.promising表示“有希望的,前景好的”。
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