Write a note of about 50 - 60 words based on the following situation: You’ve learned that your friend Jimmy is ill these days. W

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问题 Write a note of about 50 - 60 words based on the following situation:
You’ve learned that your friend Jimmy is ill these days. Write him a note expressing your concern, asking after his health and giving your best wishes.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy.

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答案 Sep. 20 Dear Jimmy, I’m very sorry to hear that you’re ill these days. Are you down with a bad cold? Or is it because you worked too hard? Are you feeling better now? I really want to go and see you, but a new task my boss assigned yesterday has prevented me from paying you a visit. Any way, I’ll come to you as soon as I finish it. Until then, I pray for your early recovery. All the best, Yours, ×××

解析 1.写50-60词左右。  时间为10分钟。
2.内容是你向你的朋友Jimmy表示问候,了解他的身体情况,并祝愿他身体早日康复。整个便条读起来要有头有尾,让读者知道事情的来龙去脉。细节不可弄错。
3.交流双方为朋友关系,语体色彩为非正式,语言表达上要较口语化,并带感情色彩。
4.便条写作有一定内容及格式要求,这是评分要点。
[写作指南]
1.先交待写便条时间;
2.接着写称呼;
3.对对方身体不适表示难过,询问有无好转,不妨说自己本想来看望,却因事未能成行,并表示希望对方早日康复;
4.客套话;
5.致敬、签名。
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