Happy Teachers’ Day! Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the dra

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问题     Happy Teachers’ Day!
    Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and
    3) give your comments.
   

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答案 As can be seen in the picture, a group of people are presenting flowers to an elderly lady sitting on a wheel chair. They are all wishing the lady a "Happy Teachers’ Day". This picture intends to convince us of the importance of paying tribute to teachers. We should never forget what our teachers have contributed to us even though we have graduated and become successful in our own profession. Personally, I think most teachers are respected and deserve recognition. First, good teachers guide us to think independently. Take my literature teacher as an example. He never told us the answers to the discussion questions directly. Instead, he often asked a succession of questions according to our responses. Gradually, we developed our critical thinking ability and until today I still benefit from his "interrogation". Second, good teachers are our spiritual mentors. They know how to encourage us, motivate us, and make us confident. They are attentive listeners, empathetic with what we have been through, and always ready to help us out of dilemma. All in all, we need to express our heartfelt gratitude to all the teachers who have shaped us, enlightened us and guided us.

解析     这幅图片刻画了一群成年人向坐在轮椅上的教师传递节日祝福的情景。尽管当年的学生都长大成才了,但是他们还是不忘师恩。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可以安排如下:
    第一段简要描绘图片,并指出图片的意图:即使我们已经毕业,事业有成了,也要不忘师恩。
    第二段提出个人看法:大部分的教师都值得我们尊敬和赞美。其一,教师引导学生独立思考,以教师训练学生批判性思维为例加以说明。其二,好的教师是学生的精神导师,他们知道如何去鼓励学生,带动学生的积极性,让学生对自己充满信心。
    第三段,总结全文。
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