• The graph below shows the turnover for three kinds of retail outlet, all owned by the same company, during a three-year period

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问题 • The graph below shows the turnover for three kinds of retail outlet, all owned by the same company, during a three-year period.
• Using the information from the graph, write a short report comparing the changes in turnover in the company’s three types of outlet.
• Write 120-140 words.

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答案Sample A The development of the turnover of FROZEN FOOD Ltd. The following report describes the changes in turnover by type of retail sector over the three years periods 2000 to 2002. In all three years the turnover made by supermarkets was the highest of all three retail outlets. Department stores remained the second greatest before small shops-outlets. The turnover reached by supermarkets increased steadily over the three years and was £80m in 2002. The turnover of department stores was£50m in 2000 but fell to £35m in 2001. In 2002 it remained steady to the previous year. After a loss in 2001, the small shops-outlets reached again a higher level but could not reach the £30m turnover of 2000. Band 3 All the content points are included and, despite minor grammatical errors and several lexical errors, there is reasonable control overall. It is a well-organised answer with an adequate range of language and fits the descriptors for band 3.

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