Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your commen

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问题     Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
    1) interpret the chart, and
    2) give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
   

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答案 The chart suggests that job-hopping is common in the surveyed industry. As a whole, all employees have ever hopped from one job to another. Most of them change jobs within 4 times. 6.37% of them leave their jobs for 4 to 8 times, followed by 1.37% for more than 8 times. Why do people change their jobs? To begin with, money can be the driving factor, especially if the salary is less than the average and one cannot make ends meet Another reason can be getting away from a "bad" boss who may not give a chance for the employee to voice, learn, and grow. Besides, employees would be inclined to look for a new job if the current workplace blocks or limits the opportunities for advancement. As far as I can see, people are entitled to make a career change. But they should watch out that they do not turn themselves into serial job-hoppers who may have their careers hurt.

解析     本题为对饼形图数据的分析以及对“跳槽”现象的剖析与评价。该图表列出了某行业员工自工作以来的跳槽次数。由图表可知,所有员工都有跳槽经历,差别只在跳槽次数的多少,其中绝大部分员工的跳槽次数在1到4次。其他员工则分别有4到8次及以上的跳槽经历。文章的主体部分可分析造成员工跳槽的原因。结合题目要求,文章可安排如下:
    第一段分析图表数据,并指出跳槽现象很普遍。
    第二段分析员工跳槽的原因:首先,工资水平低;其次,逃离“无良”老板;再次,当前工作晋升空间受限。
    第三段表达自己的观点,总结全文。
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