Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in 160—200 words. Your essay must be written clearly and should meet th

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问题 Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in 160—200 words.
Your essay must be written clearly and should meet the requirements below:
    1) write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon,
    2) and give your comments.
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答案 This cartoon vividly shows us a door-to-door promotion tour we often encounter in the daily life. As we may notice in the thought-provoking picture, a fat salesman has knocked upon the door of an apartment, and be is trying to sell slimming tea to a very thin lady, exaggerating that his tea "does work wonders." Having noticed that this salesman is overweight, the lady begins to doubt the truth of his words. So she replies ironically: "Will it make me fat?" This lady will definitely have no intention of buying his tea due to her unpleasant experience of buying fake products in the past. Fake products are creeping rampantly into the market today for the following reasons. To profiteer enormously, quite a few firms produce lots of shoddy goods. These producers do not take into account the quality of their products, but exaggerate their functions or effects. To make easy money, some stores knowingly sell counterfeit items. What those sellers are concerned about is how much money they can get from their customers, not the fact that the fake may cause damage to property and injury or even death to individuals. To eliminate fake products from the marketplace, our government, the authorities concerned and consumers must participate in an anti-counterfeit campaign. For example, stiff new fines should be officially imposed so that those who continue to manufacture or sell shoddy goods may risk going bankrupt. Since frequent infringement of consumer’s legal rights remains a problem, China’s Consumers Association should also make it possible for consumers to know what compensation is available to them. As a result, victims can resort to the law to get justice. Although the drive to protect consumers’ interests and rights is no easy job, our joint efforts will ultimately pay off.

解析     从漫画的内容来看,读者不难发现该漫画作者所要表达的寓意:当前市场经济中出现的产品质量问题、伪劣产品问题和消费者权益问题等。
    本文第一自然段简要的就画面中的人物和减肥茶进行了描述。第二自然段阐述性的说明了关于伪劣产品的方方面面。之后在最后提出了解决问题的方案。
    整篇文章主要采用的是分析性的阐述思维方法,围绕着"伪劣产品"、"消费者"、"销售者"、"法规"等关键词概念展开。作者在字里行间流露出对伪劣产品的批评态度。注意段落之间在概念和逻辑上的承上启下的衔接手段。
    本文还可以从其他的角度进行立意和论证,如消费者由于受到太多的欺骗而对市场的产品失去了信心。
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