Suppose you are asked to give advice on whether school campuses should be open to the pubic at any time or in a limited period o

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问题 Suppose you are asked to give advice on whether school campuses should be open to the pubic at any time or in a limited period of time. Write an essay to state your opinion. You should write at least150 words but no more than 200 words.

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答案 My View on Visiting School Campus Recently, whether school campuses should be open to the public at any time or in a limited period of time has sparked furious discussions. Those in favor of the former argue that as public institutions, schools should give access to visitors so that they can not only share educational resources but also enjoy scenic beauty and amazing culture atmosphere. In my viewpoint, school campuses should accommodate free visitors only during weekends, legal holidays and summer or winter breaks. To begin with, as a place for education, academic research and talent training instead of scenic spots, schools should give high priority to education and safety concerns. Abiding by this principle, the universities can run well. But this doesn’t mean schools must deny all visitors at any time. Those who have an overwhelming desire to visit universities are warmly welcomed during school holidays. In conclusion, the universities can receive the public in a limited period of time, thereby satisfying both students and visitors.

解析 开门见山,直入主题,点明此篇作文谈论的话题。
用not only…but also…句型引出正方观点。
表明自己的观点,即校园应该在周末、法定节假日和寒暑假时段限时开放。
用To begin with 论证学校应该把重点放在教育与安全方面。
用But 话锋一转,提出第二个论据,学校放假期间,大学欢迎所有访客参观。总结上文,得出限时开放校园的结论,与首段论点呼应。
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