Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1. describe the drawing briefly,
    2. explain its intended meaning, and
    3. give your comments.
    You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
   

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答案 The drawing given above portrays a thought-provoking scene in which two tourists are enjoying sightseeing by boat, leaving their trash lying around. In the bow stands a boatman, who turns a blind eye to such a contemptible behavior. Not far away, a great deal of garbage, such as bottles, fish bones and watermelon peels, is floating on the river. As Gan Harman, a famous American futurist, says, " It is usually their own surroundings as a form of free merchandise. I do not know any way to cherish and spoil. " Environmental pollution has indeed become increasingly acute worldwide, perhaps most egregiously in areas with high concentrations of tourist activities. Improper garbage disposal can be a major despoiler of the natural environment—lands, rivers, mountains as well as the air we live by. Therefore, to return a clean and congenial tourist environment, due attention should be paid to the disgraceful behaviors of those rude and boorish tourists. But what can people do to offset this problem? Firstly, strong punitive actions should be implemented to curb uncivilized behaviors harmful to the environment. Secondly, use recyclable and reusable products rather than disposable ones, especially when traveling. Sometimes years are required for the environment to be clean and free of pollution—thus, concerted and unremitting effort matters in this drawn-out battle.

解析     品味图画文字——旅程之“余”,不难发现该图的讽刺意味。总体来看,图画由一艘游船和一堆废弃物构成,这不禁使人联想到现如今的社会热点话题——“环保”。显然,船上的两名游客缺乏公德心,将垃圾随意丢弃于水中。而船夫的漠视又反映出人们对此行为的习以为常。此外,游船不远处的一堆垃圾从侧面反映了旅游中不文明行为的普遍性。考生在描述图画时,要抓住重点,不必对“船的构造”、“垃圾的种类”等细节一一赘述,以免模糊了焦点。
    第一段:描述图画。可将描述重点放在两名游客身上,详述其不文明行为。继而通过漠视的船夫和堆积的垃圾烘托该问题的严重性。
    第二段:揭示寓意,对图画背后的社会现象进行分析。可以从公德角度入手,也可以从环境角度切入,又或者分析造成该现象的原因。
    第三段:总结评论。可侧重于问题的解决方案。而解决方案从政府、法律法规、提高环保意识等方面展开为宜。
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