Campus violence has existed for many years and aroused a lot of concern. How can we stop it? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN

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问题     Campus violence has existed for many years and aroused a lot of concern. How can we stop it? Write a composition in NO LESS THAN 200 words on the following topic:
    How to Stop Campus Violence?
    You are to write in three parts:
    In the first part, state specifically what your idea is.
    In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 How to Stop Campus Violence? Gun shots, gang fights and peers bullying in the campus in U.S. are reported now and then. In China, some of these problems are actually more and more prominent. Given this context, to stop campus violence, I think it is best to set up a proactive counseling scheme, consisting of case workers and psychological professionals. First of all, this counseling scheme takes preemptive measures to nib the bud of violence before it is too late. We do not wait for the problems to happen. Instead, we detect some signs of violence and pinpoint the offenders, who will be subject to mandatory counseling. Through professional sessions, these violent offenders could be contained and managed in a measured and progressive manner. Second, counseling scheme is also accessible to those potential victims of campus violence. Usually, being afraid of the retaliation from reporting the violence offence, victims keep silent and suppress their feelings The magnitude of offence is thus growing without external intervention If a counseling scheme is set up victims can turn to it for guidance and help They are able to get the psychological sessions and possible intervention could be staged before it is too late. In conclusion, I think a campus-based counseling scheme is helpful and beneficial to prevent, intervene and eliminate violence.

解析     本题属于“问题解决型”作文,涉及的题材是“校园学习”。该题要求考生对“如何遏止校园暴力”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    第一段:从校园暴力在美国猖獗人题,建议在大学里面建立一个辅导机制。
    第二段:阐述原因。第一,辅导机制能采取先发制人的措施,把暴力扼杀在萌芽状态,以防事态严重而失控:第二,辅导机制也能给可能的受害者提供帮助,有助解决受害者因害怕报复而不敢举报暴力的情况。
    第三段:重申观点——在学校里建立辅导机制对于预防暴力、干预暴力、消除暴力是有帮助的。
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