You have had a class discussion on being rich and famous. Your teacher has now asked you to write a composition, giving your opi

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问题 You have had a class discussion on being rich and famous. Your teacher has now asked you to write a composition, giving your opinions on the following statement:
   Everybody would like to be rich and famous.
   Write your composition.

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答案 We tend to assume that everybody wants to be rich and famous. What does that mean? To find out, we might ask why people want to be rich or famous. They might say, "I want to buy a big house and own cars," or, "I want people to know and love me," or "I want to be important and powerful," or even, "I want to be able to enjoy my life." I hat different people answer this question differently is significant. We have only general definitions of the terms "rich" and "famous". Usually, these ideas really represent something else. Many people are unhappy, and also happen not to be rich or famous; their problems are different from those of people who are. Many believe that being rich or famous would solve their problems;yet we know that the rich and famous are often unhappy. Seldom do people truly want wealth or fame.Often they want something Simpler and mope real,They want to feel happy,and safe,and good about themselves,That is a different matter.

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文章基本内容
 就作文命题发表赞同或反对意见或从正反两方来论述命题
语法与结构  具备表述意见并进行相关说明的语言能力
文章结构及连贯性  运用适当的段落和衔接词清晰的论述自己的观点
适用文体及格式  中性文体(正式与非正式文体之间)
目标读者感觉  明晰阐述的观点
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