You see the following notice in an international magazine. COMPETITION Is it better to l

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问题  You see the following notice in an international magazine.
                                     COMPETITION
   Is it better to live in a flat, a modern house or an old house?
   Write us an article giving your opinions.
   The best article will be published and the writer will receive ¥500.
   Write your article for the magazine.

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答案 For years, people have had the goal of owning a house, particularly in the suburbs. Put it’s better in many ways to live in a fiat. A decent-sized flat in a city can give us the chance to live close to a large number of other people. People who live in houses tend to be isolated from their neighbors, spending time in their own worlds. To live in a flat, in a building with dozens of other people, means living in a community and feeling close to the other people in that community. A flat is usually the only choice for people who want to live in the heart of a city—this means the chance to interact with people from different places and backgrounds. Our cities are centers of culture, and the arts —of many things that make modern life interesting and exciting. Not everyone is interested in city life. Some people prefer a house in the suburb. But for true closeness to life, a flat in the city is the best choice.

解析  [写作要求]
文章基本内容
 1.文章也应就住房种类的选择发表自己的看法 
 2.也可以仅对某一类住房展开论述
语法与结构  发表自己就某一事物的看法/观点及阐述相应缘由的语言能力
文章结构及连贯性  运用合理的段落和衔接词,清晰的扩展观点
适用文体及格式  正式与非正式文体的自然过渡,通篇文体风格保持一致
目标读者感觉  理解作者表述的观点
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