You see this notice on your school noticeboard. SPECIAL PEOPLE •Who is the most important perso

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问题  You see this notice on your school noticeboard.
                                 SPECIAL PEOPLE
•Who is the most important person in your life?
•Why is this person special to you?
   Write us an article for the school magazine answering these questions.
   Write your article.

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答案 The most important person in my life is the lady who sells me bean curd for breakfast. This may seem strange, but I have come to realize how much she means to me. She is the first person I see every day-she is always there at six in the morning outside my building, and always talks to me with a kind smile. Over the years, I have gradually gotten to know her. She was born in a village outside the city. The village has always been poor, and she left years ago to look for a better life. It’s hard for her to find a good job, but she works hard and sends the money to her family back home. Whenever I feel like complaining about my problems, I think about her, her life, and the way she smiles when talking about her family. Her service to me is not great. Yet she reminds me that kindness is important, whether it is great or small, to family or to strangers.

解析  [写作要求]
文章基本内容
 描述生活中最重要的人物并说明原因
语法与结构
 运用描述和说明性语言
文章结构及连贯性
 运用段落和衔接词清晰地展开观点
适用文体及格式
 非正式、正式皆可,但整篇文章的文体应保持统一
目标读者感觉
 能读懂文中在作者生活中最重要的人物的相关信息
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