Study the following graph carefully and write an essay. You should: 1) describe the graph and interpret its meaning, and 2) poi

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问题     Study the following graph carefully and write an essay. You should:

1) describe the graph and interpret its meaning, and
2) point out the problems and give your comments.
    Your composition should be more than 150 words. You should write your composition neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2 .

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答案 As can be seen from the above chart, some important changes have taken place in the past years with regard to the floating population in City S. The number rocketed from about 20,000 in 1980 to 100,000 in 1990, and to 280,000 in 2000. It tells us that the floating population has surged into cities. It is no difficult job for us to come up with some possible factors that underlie the above trend. In the first place, such a population mainly consists of rural labor. It relieves the land pressure in the countryside. In the second place, floating population began to exert heavy pressure on cities. Wherever it gets together, housing, unemployment and food supply are the headaches that local governments have to tackle. Another serious problem is social security. What’s more, agriculture is losing its best work force; much farming work is done by women, old people or even children. Some farm lands lay uncultivated. As far as I am concerned, I think we should take some actions to put an end to the phenomenon. On the one hand, we should publicize job ads and requirements appropriate for rural labor to prevent blind’ transferring. On the other hand, we should develop agriculture economy and related fields, thus absorbing redundant local labor. Only in this way can we stop the phenomenon.

解析 一、审题:图表作文的主题很容易把握,考生更多应考虑全文的布局。本篇范文的头两段基本上是复制品。第三段有变化,涉及到作者的建议和措施。
二、借鉴:范文中有些句型可参考使用,考生应记住并模仿。
    1) As can be seen from the above chart, some important changes have taken place in the past years with regard to...
    2) It tells us that...
    3) It is no difficult job for us to come up with some possible factors that underlie the above trend.
    4) In the first place .... In the second place .... Another serious problem is...What’s more ....
    5) As far as I am concerned, I think we should take some actions to put an end to the phenomenon.
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