Suppose you are Li Ming and you want to further your study on your major. Write a letter of application to the head of the Regis

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问题     Suppose you are Li Ming and you want to further your study on your major. Write a letter of application to the head of the Registration Department of a university to which you intend to be admitted and the letter should include the following information:
    1) a brief account of yourself
    2) your eagerness to study in the university
    3) and some further remarks.
    You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. You do not need to write the ad dress.

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答案 Dear Sir or Madam, I’m writing to inquire whether you accept senior visiting scholars from outside the United States. I’m a vice-professor in the Department of Education at Northeastern Normal University in China, aged 37. I graduated from this university in 1983, majoring in special education, and received a Master Degree in 1986 at the same university. After graduation I have been engaged in teaching at this university and have been doing research in deaf child special education as the leader of the research program. I’d like to prepare myself for further research in this field and I know there has been a tremendous breakthrough in this field at your university led by a group of famous professors in special education. I’d like you to send me an application form and other relevant information. My documents and references are available on request. Thank you for your attention! Yours sincerely, Li Ming

解析     当一个人想得到某种机会或某些东西,如申请得到奖学金、求学、申请出国签证等,往往通过申请信来请求。写申请信的时候一般应注意以下几点:
    (1) 语气要诚挚友好,措辞要严谨。
    (2) 对于申请的内容和原因一定要写得非常清楚。
    (3) 期望得到的心情一定要表达出来。
    对申请信分段其内容一般应包括以下几个部分:明确是在写申请;申请的具体内容和缘由;自己的情况和条件;提出要求,如回信、面试等等。每一部分都要做到清晰、简明。对于不同的申请内容,在介绍自己情况的时候也要有不同的侧重。例如在求学信中,应比较侧重介绍自己已有的学位及专业情况;在申请留学经济资助的信中,应着重介绍自己的学业及学术水平,因为国外很多学校颁发奖学金是以此为标准的。
    从题目的要求我们可以明显地看到,这里我们要写的是一篇申请作为访问学者的一封信。文中明确地指出写作中必须包含的三点:第一,要介绍自己的总体情况;第二,表达你想继续求学的强烈愿望;第三,索要一些相关的材料。这三点通常也是求学申请信中必备的三点,因此写作中一定不能缺少。
常用句型:
1.I am writing to ask for admission to your department.It’s my long—cherished dream to pursue my study in your honored department.
   我申请就读于贵系,这是我长久以来的愿望。
2.Would you be so kind as to provide me with some relevant information?
   您能否为我提供一些相关信息呢?
3.I wish to apply for admission to your department as a postgraduate student.
   我希望申请攻读贵系研究生。
4.I shall be glad to furnish you with any further information concerning my education and work experience.
   我很乐意为您提供我个人学习和工作经历的有关资料。
5.If further materials are required,I am only too willing to forward them to you.
   如果需要其它材料,我非常乐意寄上。
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