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Is promotion the most powerful drive to work? This has been an intensely discussed question for years. The following are the sup

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问题     Is promotion the most powerful drive to work? This has been an intensely discussed question for years. The following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and give your view on the issue.
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YES
    Getting promoted is the most powerful drive to work To be honest, the main purpose of doing jobs is to earn money for life. For most people, getting promoted means a pay raise, which enables them to live a better life.
    When you are promoted to a high level in the company, you will have more power in making decisions in your job. Getting a promotion also means that you will gain more respect and attention from the whole society.
NO
    As a young man, finding a sense of fulfillment in his career life is the most important thing. Everyone wants to make his life meaningful. Work becomes an effective way for ordinary people to achieve their goals, which could put a sense of fulfillment into their life.
    The biggest drive for people to work hard is that his effort can be valued and respected by other people. Without recognition, one will feel his work is nothing important and then lose his enthusiasm for working hard. In this sense, to realize one’s personal value is the most important.
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答案 Promotion Not Serving as the Most Powerful Drive Promotion is an important, powerful drive to work, but whether it is the most powerful drive to work has sparked a hot debate among the public. Those who support that it is the most important one believe a higher position means higher salary and more power which will stimulate workers to a large degree. However, some people argue that the sense of fulfillment and recognition are more important than promotion. In my view, promotion should not be considered the most significant drive to wok. Firstly, not all employees have the ambition to get promoted. Promotion brings not only reward and power, but also more responsibility, higher pressure and less personal space. Most ordinary people who deem work only as a way of making a living are not inclined to sacrifice their personal life to work. What’s more, leading posts are limited considering the large number of workers. Both employers and employees have to admit that only a small proportion of total workers may have a chance to get promoted. As there are various means to inspire employees’ passion and enthusiasm, for example, by offering them with higher salary, options on shares and paid leave, I can’t see the reason why promotion is the most powerful drive. In conclusion, promotion has limited effects in motivating people to work and other means should also be adopted.
解析     题目给出了两种观点，同意升职是工作中最大的动力的一方认为，升职可以赚更多的钱，过更好的生活，有更大的权利，获得更多的尊重和关注。不同意的一方则认为，获得成就感和认同才是最重要的。首先总结两方的意见，然后给出个人观点。文章结构可安排如下：
    第一段：简要概括赞同方和反对方的观点，并表明自己的观点：升职并非工作最大的动力。
    第二段：陈述自己的观点。可分两点论证：第一，升职意味着更大的压力和付出，不是所有人都愿意为工作牺牲个人生活；第二，领导岗位有限，还有很多其他激励员工的手段。
    第三段：总结全文，重申观点：升职的激励作用有限，还有很多其他方法。
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