Competition/Cooperation Is More Important Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Ot

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问题     Competition/Cooperation Is More Important
    Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. What’s your opinion? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    Competition/Cooperation Is More Important
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
    In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

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答案 Cooperation Is More Important We are living in a society where competition seems to be everywhere. That is why some people think that we should teach our children to survive in competition. However, I think it is more important to teach children to be cooperative. First of all, cooperation is usually a good way to keep us ahead of competition. Human beings are social animals, which implies that many of the undertakings are completed through concerted efforts. If children know how to collaborate with each other, they actually have a better chance to survive and excel. As the saying goes, "individuals add; team work multiplies". Children should be aware of the fact that the strength of a whole team is greater than the individual sums. Secondly, cooperation somehow teaches children to be helpful and caring for others. When children are in competition, they are usually aggressive and hostile. Cooperation, on the contrary, subtly influences the way they treat each other and look after each other. When they understand the importance of cooperation, children in their adulthood would spare no effort to offer a helping hand for those in need. In conclusion, it is more important to teach our kids to be cooperative than competitive, because cooperation can increase our chance of success and make us less self-centered.

解析     本题属于“立场选择型”作文,涉及的题材是“文化教育”。该题要求考生对“竞争还是合作更重要”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求,可谋篇布局如下:
    开头:从社会竞争激烈入题,指出教导孩子学会合作更重要。
    主体:阐述原因。
    1.合作能让我们在竞争中先拔头筹。“个人做加法;团队做乘法。”
    2.合作使孩子学会互相帮助、关爱他人。
    结尾:重申观点,合作能提高我们成功的几率,也让我们不那么以自我为中心。
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