For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Influence of Internet on Our Life. You should writ

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问题     For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled The Influence of Internet on Our Life. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
1.我们的生活离不开网络
2.网络也会给我们带来负面的影响
3.我们应该如何正确使用网络
                The Influence of Internet on Our Life

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答案 The Influence of Internet on Our Life If asked whether the Internet is the greatest discovery of the 20th century, my answer would be yes. The Internet has drawn the world closer together, realized countless incredible dreams, and provided modern people with a great many conveniences and a brilliant life. The Internet has become a part of people’s life. Many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet. Nowadays, the Internet plays an important role in our life. We use computer for working,chatting, playing games, watching the movie, and searching anything by clicking on Internet. But its many negative effects are already visible. For example, Internet addicts tend to withdraw to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person. Children are exposed to online pornography and violence, and moreover, they can be crazy about playing computer games if they can’t control themselves. There is no doubt that the Internet has enriched our life, expanded our vision, and transformed the world into a global village. But on the other hand, its drawbacks shouldn’t be neglected. We should use the Internet with wisdom and keep it at a safe distance and never lose ourselves.

解析 本次写作试题要求对“网络对人们生活的影响”进行分析阐述,在第一部分中,作者先描写当今网络成为我们生活的一部分(The Internet has become a part of people’s life。),我们的生活离不开网络这一现象(Many people simply feel they cannot live without the Internet.);接着在第二段中阐述了网络带来的一些负面影响,例如: 迷恋网络的人把自已孤立在自己想象的虚拟世界里而不愿和现实的人交流(Internet addicts tend to withdraw.to their own fantasy world rather than communicate with a real person.),孩子们受到网络上的色情和暴力信息的毒害甚至沉迷于网络游戏不能自拔(Children are exposed to online pornography and violence,and moreover,they can be crazy about playing computer games if they can’t control themselves.);最后一段按照要求谈我们应该如何正确使用网络,作者提出虽然网络有很多优点(enrich our life,expand our vision,and transform the world into a global village),但是它的弊端不容忽视,我们应该理性地利用网络,控制好自己,和网络保持适当的距离(We should use the Internet with wisdom and keep it at a safe distance and never lose ourselves.)。
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