The following chart shows the source distribution of students in vocational schools. Look at the chart carefully and write your

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问题     The following chart shows the source distribution of students in vocational schools. Look at the chart carefully and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should interpret the chart, give your comments and state the reasons.

    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 The Source of Vocational School Students The pie chart above clearly demonstrates that nearly half of vocational school students come from moderately developed regions in the middle and western parts of China, and 37 percent are from developed regions in the eastern and coastal areas of China. We can see from the chart that vocational school students mainly come from developed and moderately developed regions. There is no doubt that the change of people’s view on vocational education and the demand of the job market lead to the craze for vocational education in these areas. For one thing, people no longer consider university education the only way to success. Many vocational schools adjust their curriculums according to the requirements of economic development. Those schools also have fostered a great many successful talented people. For another, the job market is in great need of professionals of different trades. Compared with thousands of university graduates struggling with job hunting, vocational school graduates with skills tend to have an easier time finding work. Taking into account what has been discussed above, we can arrive at the conclusion that vocational school graduates will be in great demand in the near future. I believe that we should not define our view of talented people with prejudice. Given time and opportunities, vocational school students can also be very successful. It would be great if we can help them find the way to success.

解析     本题为图表作文。图表展示了某职业院校的生源分布情况。在具体行文方面,考生应先概述图表内容,即某职业院校学生的主要来源是中、西部中等发达地区以及东部和沿海发达地区;然后从人才教育和就业市场两个角度分析职业院校学生来自这些地区的原因;最后提出自己的观点。
    开头部分对饼图中的数据进行说明:近一半的职业院校学生来自中、西部中等发达地区,37%的职业院校学生来自东部和沿海发达地区。
    中间部分分析这些地区是职业院校生源地的原因:一方面,人们不再认为上大学是获得成功的唯一出路。很多职业学校根据经济发展的需求调整其课程设置,已经培养了很多成功的人才。另一方面,就业市场急需不同行业的专业人才。与成千上万努力找工作的大学毕业生相比,有技术的职业学校毕业生更容易找到工作。
    结尾部分总结自己观点,指出我们不能让成见左右我们的人才观,如果给予他们时间和机会,职业院校毕业生同样可以成功。
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