The mental health of China’s youngsters is on the decline, with 60 percent of college students feeling isolated and 80 percent f

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问题     The mental health of China’s youngsters is on the decline, with 60 percent of college students feeling isolated and 80 percent feeling social injustice, a survey has suggested. Those feelings find their expression through irregular behaviors, skipping classes, autism and rebellion, and have also led to psychological problems like Internet addiction and suicide, according to a recent survey released by the China Population Communication Center. What is your opinion?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    My Views on Chinese Students’ Psychological Problems

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答案 My Views on Chinese Students’ Psychological Problems A recent survey shows that the mental health of China’s youngsters is on the decline. Many college students feel isolated and more feel social injustice. These feelings have led to psychological problems like Internet addiction and suicide. In my opinion, the current crisis of personality is the consequence of the lack of psychological care from both family and society. First and foremost, family factors contribute most to students’ mental problems. We often say that parents are the first teachers of their children. A good family environment is the prerequisite of the development of children. But many parents neglect their task in the fostering of a child’s early characters and may consider financial support as their sole duty. Without parents’ love and escort, children often feel lonely and even deserted, which may cause their loss of family cohesion. What’s more, the society, especially schools, did not attach enough importance to the sound development of students’ mental health. The whole society and the majority of schools in China still adopt an examination-oriented educational concept. The only standard to assess a school is their admission rate to famous schools. Under such circumstances, teachers will care more about " good students" and neglect " bad students" , and thus " bad students" may develop psychological problems. Young students’ mental problem is by no means a minor issue; it is closely related to the rise and fall of the Chinese people. We should not forget students’ mental health when emphasizing a good mastery of knowledge. It is time that the whole nation should seriously consider the crisis and take measures to solve it.

解析     本题是一个观点型题目,应该指出造成中国学生心理问题的原因,也可以提出解决办法,并根据自己的观点进行论述。针对该题目,可以根据以下思路展开写作:
    思路1:侧重从社会和家庭两方面论述心理问题产生的原因。
    应试教育带来的苦果,学校过分强调学生的学习成绩,使学生成了刷分的机器,与此同时却忽略了孩子的心理健康。家长也缺乏对孩子的心理引导:很多家长忙于工作,以为只要出钱就行了。对此学校和家长都应加强对孩子心理健康方面的引导和教育。
    思路2:侧重如何解决学生的心理问题。
    一方面要完善家庭教育,建立和谐的亲子关系。学生的心理问题主要是由于缺乏与父母的沟通和交流。因此,要建立和谐的亲子关系、创造良好的家庭环境。另一方面要加强学校教育。学生在心理发展上存在许多的困惑与问题需要学校给予更多的帮助与疏导,需要通过教师、集体的温暖弥补亲子关系缺失对其人格健全发展产生的消极影响。
    范文选取了思路1,从社会和家庭两方面分析了中国学生产生心理问题的原因,并呼吁政府尽快颁布相关法律法规,学生也应加强自身的心理修养。
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