For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following topic. You should write at least 120 words but

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the following topic. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
   Online bookstores such as Amazon and Dangdang are enjoying great popularity in recent years. Some people argue that traditional bookstores will be replaced by those online bookstores since people can always buy cheaper books there. What’ s your opinion?

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答案 Will Traditional Bookstores Be replaced by Online Bookstores? (1)The rapid development of the Internet and e-commerce has facilitated the opening of online bookstores.(2)Therefore, there is a debate over whether such virtual bookstores will take the place of traditional ones. Admittedly, purchasing books online is much more convenient and efficient.(3)However, the rise of online bookstores does not necessarily cause the doom of traditional ones, since they have some irreplaceable merits.(4)On the one hand, there are always people who are just attracted to the pleasure of standing in front of stacks of books and flipping through books they like.(5)On the other hand, the amenities provided by traditional bookstores can never be replaced by virtual ones. An afternoon spent peacefully with the pleasant smell of books and coffee in a street corner bookstore is an experience a booklover will forever cherish. Going to a bookstore, for some, has therefore nothing to do with efficiency and convenience: it is in itself a pleasure. (6)In conclusion, however developed the online bookstore is, traditional bookstores have good reasons to exist They are complementary to each other, each catering to the needs of different people.(7)Store owners, however, have to adjust themselves and provide better services to survive the onslaught from online bookstores.

解析    第一段介绍背景,引出人们争议的话题。
   第二段提出个人观点,指出传统书店的两大优势:为读者带来置身于书海的乐趣;与书香为伴,享受闲暇时光的欢乐。
   第三段总结观点,并为传统书店的老板提出建议。
(1)介绍网上书店形成的原因。
(2)引出话题:传统书店是否会被网络书店所取代?
(3)转折的手法与前一句形成对比,表明个人立场.并引出下文:传统书店有不可取代的优点。
(4)(5)清晰地展示了传统书店不会被网络书店取代的两个原因,结构分明。
(6)总结观点,再次表明立场。
(7)建议传统书店的老板在网络书店的冲击下做出调整,合理应对。
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