All of us will work in our jobs with different kinds of people and we have to possess certain characteristics to keep on good te

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问题     All of us will work in our jobs with different kinds of people and we have to possess certain characteristics to keep on good terms with our co-workers. What do you think is the most important characteristic of a co-worker? Write a composition of about 400 words on the following topic:
                The Most Important Characteristic of a Co-worker
    In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appro-priacy. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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答案 The Most Important Characteristic of a Co-worker In the workplace, you meet a variety of people with diverse backgrounds and you are required to maintain sound relationships with many of them in order to have a pleasant work environment. And in most instances you have to rely on them. From my point of view, a co-worker needs to have some important characteristics, of which cooperation can be counted as the most important. Although our culture seems to put emphasis on individualism and reward those who are not good team players but mavericks, there is no denying the fact that employees with a cooperative spirit enjoy great popularity in the corporate environment. Such people know perfectly that they are always part of a larger team, and know better than to put their interests ahead of those of the team. In a word, they can work as part of a team and know how to work well with others to accomplish common goals. Being a team player is very important. A company is like a machine and everyone in it acts as a part. When all parts cooperate, there is a chance to succeed. If someone isn’ t cooperative, and wants to go his own way, he won’t be of much help to the growth of the company. I have met several people who are fired, even if they are over-qualified for their jobs, because they have failed to cooperate with their colleges. Although they did their part wonderfully, but when discussing with others in a brainstorming session, they seemed reserved and unwilling to express their opinions, and when others ran into difficulties, they just stood by looking at what would happen next. As a result, the project made slow progress. Therefore, I believe that if employees do not cooperate with each other, it would be a devastating blow for a company. Also remember that a large part of teamwork is getting along with other people. So a good co-worker can also keep a good relationship with others. He can be trusted as a real friend or even as a family member. And working with him can make you feel at ease. It is obvious that we spend most of our days at office working with people with their own characteristics. In my view, it is the cooperative spirit that makes a good co-worker. After all, if a group of people is pulling in different directions, then less is going to be accomplished. So if you are an up-and-coming employee, before you reach the top you have to learn to play well with others. If you don’t, you will be fired long before you hit a position of power.

解析 第一部分(第一段):表明观点,同事应该具备的最重要的特质是合作精神。第二部分(第二至四段):采用说理、举例等论证方法证明观点。第三部分(第五段):呼应首段,结束全文。
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