You must answer this question. 1. Your English friend, Bill, is a travel writer and he recently visited a town which you know we

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问题    You must answer this question.
1. Your English friend, Bill, is a travel writer and he recently visited a town which you know well. He has written a chapter about the town for a guide book and you have just read the chapter. Read the extract from Bill’s letter and your notes. Then, using all your notes, write a letter to Bill, giving him the information and suggestions he needs.
   Thanks for agreeing to check the chapter that I’ve written. Could you let me know what you liked about it? If any of the information is inaccurate, please give me the correct information! Do you think there’s anything else I should include?
   Once again, thanks a lot for reading the chapter Please write back soon.
   Bill
              Notes for Bill
              Tell Bill what I liked about his chapter—places to visit  ....
              Give Bill correct information about
              —parking in city centre
              —museum opening times
              Suggest Bill include
              —map
              —nightlife (give Bill details)
   Write a letter of between 120 and 180 words in an appropriate style.
   Do not write any postal addresses.

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答案Dear Bill, I’m writing about the San Diego chapter from your new guide.Reading it was gnate fun,so there’s no need to thank me.Your section on local tourist attractions was excellent,especially the descriptions of the beaches I’m looking forward to reading the next chapter There are a few things I should point out—most parking lots downtown charge five dollars Per hour not two.There are some cheaper lots, as you say, but many of those have I started to raise prices.Also , the Natural History Museum and other museums at Balboa Park open at 9:30 AM,not 10:30 AM.I think all of your other information is accurate. Remember to include a map of the down town area.There are a lot of one-ways trees, so visitors tend to need help You should also add something about the downtown nightlife.The most popular clubs are called Moira’s(corner of B St.and 4th St.)and Branson’s(6th St. and India St.).Let me know if you have any questions about any of this. Yours truly Mary

解析  [写作要求]
                文章基本内容
(回复信函应包含的要点)  1. 对Bill所著的相关章节予以肯定的评价
 2. 提供要市中心停车的信息
 3. 提供博物馆开馆及闭馆的时间
 4. 建议Bill增加城市地图
 5. 建议Bill增加城市夜生活内容并给予一些信息
语法与结构  能够使用恰当的语言得供信息并提出针对性建议
文章结构及连贯性  1. 体现信函的格式,并在信的开头就阐明回复信函的缘由
 2. 文章的要点结构清晰
 3. 恰当的开头和结尾
适用文体及格式  非正式信函
目标读者感觉  能够完全获取作者提供的信息
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