Write an essay based on the following diagram. In your writing, you should 1) describe the diagram, and 2) give your c

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问题     Write an essay based on the following diagram. In your writing, you should
    1)  describe the diagram, and
    2)  give your comments.
    You should write about 150 words.
   

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答案 The chart illustrates the trend of the contribution of the secondary and tertiary industries to China’s GDP from 2006 to the first quarter of 2013. As it shows, the secondary industry has been on the downward trend, decreasing from 47.9% in 2006 to 45.9% in 2013. On the contrary, the tertiary industry has been on the rise, increasing from 40.9% in 2006 to 47.8% in 2013. It is important to note the reverse trends of the secondary and tertiary industries contribution to GDP in China. The increasing trend of the tertiary industry is actually a good sign, showing that China’s development is increasingly dependent on quality service and a knowledge-based economy. This means that China’s economy is moving towards a more developed stage. To better facilitate the development of the tertiary industry, talents with versatile skills are crucial and critical. Therefore, we should train more people with soft skills, such as interpersonal communication skills, language proficiency and computer literacy.

解析 该图表显示了从2006年到2013年第二和第三产业GDP占比的趋势。从图表可见,第三产业不断攀升,第二产业呈下降趋势。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:第一段描述图表。第二段提出个人看法:中国的发展越来越依靠知识型经济。第三段提出建议:培养具备多种软技能的人才,从而推进第三产业的繁荣。
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