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  3. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insura

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insura

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问题 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
    describe the item you lost
    explain how you lost it
    tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
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答案This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 5 score. Here is the examiner’s comment: The answer addresses all the bullet points but does not cover them adequately, either through insufficient information (the second bullet point) or through lack of clarity (the third bullet point). The purpose of the letter is not always clear. Although organising the letter in line with the bullet points provides some logic, linking devices are not effectively used. Reference and substitution occur but are often unclear. The range of vocabulary is limited but just adequate for the task. While there are no spelling errors, inappropriate word choices and faulty word formation require the reader to make some effort to understand the letter. Complex sentences are attempted, but are mainly limited to ’which’ clauses. Frequent grammatical errors and faulty punctuation cause the reader some difficulty. [*]
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