1. 描述一下你在公共场所所亲眼目睹的扒窗事件; 2.谴责这种不文明行为; 3.在构建和谐社会进程中,人人都应该有正义感。 Pick pocketing

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问题 1. 描述一下你在公共场所所亲眼目睹的扒窗事件;
2.谴责这种不文明行为;
3.在构建和谐社会进程中,人人都应该有正义感。
              Pick pocketing

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答案 Pick pocketing ①Yesterday, I witnessed a theft incident on my way home. While waiting for a bus, a woman took her wallet out and paid for a newspaper at a nearby newspaper booth. After putting her wallet back into her handbag and she began to look through the news titles when a middle-aged man brushed past her muttering "Excuse me". Swiftly, her wallet was in the man’s hand. ②The crazy pickpocketing has become a national epidemic and poses a grave threat to the residents’ and visitors’ property safety. Pickpocketing prevention, a daunting task for police, makes sense. All sides involved in this problem must join their efforts to remove this social cancer. ③Everyone share the huge responsibility for demonstrating their justice at proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious society.

解析    ①审题及布局。从文章的提示要求上看,应该首先对把扒窃时间进行描述,随后对这种不文明的现象进行谴责,最后推导出主题,提出呼吁,即呼吁大家为建设文明社会共同努力。在布局上,根据题目中给出的提纲来展开即可。第一段描述在公共场所所亲眼目睹的扒窃事件;第二段强烈谴责这种不文明行为:第三段呼吁大家共同努力,为消除扒窃行为做出自己的努力。②语言。本文是一篇论说文[考频:9]。通过分析扒窃事件,呼吁大家都应该为建设和谐社会而富有正义感。因此,在论述时,段落之内、句子之间要求运用能表示上下文语义关系的连同。语言要简洁、清新,富有鼓动性。
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    Yesterday, I witnessed ______ incident on my way home. While ______, ______. After ______ when ______. Swiftly, ______.
   The crazy ______ has become a national epidemic and poses a grave threat to ______. ______ prevention, a daunting task for police, makes sense. All sides involved in this problem must join their efforts to remove this social cancer.
   Everyone share the huge responsibility for demonstrating their justice at proper time. Personal responsibility is vital to build a harmonious society.
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