Some young people are fascinated by cyber love and they gain wonderful feelings and pleasure from it. However, others hold the i

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问题     Some young people are fascinated by cyber love and they gain wonderful feelings and pleasure from it. However, others hold the idea that cyber love is a silly thing. What is your point of view? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    Is Cyber Love Reliable? You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

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答案 There has been a heated debate over how reliable cyber love is and how risky it is to get whole-heartedly involved in it. Cyber love seems a kind of fantastic thing to those who have been addicted to online romance. But I would rather express my love to someone whom I can see, speak to, stay with than one in the virtual cyber world. The following reasons may support my preference. First, cyber love is unrealistic at times. It is usually based on young people’s fantasy about love and therefore beautiful and sweet in their mind. Yet love means more than imagination and sweetness. Love is realistic understanding and caring for and sharing with your partner in reality, so unrealistic cyber love won’t last for long. Second, cyber love could be deceptive. Unlike the real world, the Internet community enables netizens to hide themselves behind a screen. One may speak untruthfully to others without being found out and vice versa The person with whom you fall in love in the romantic world may be a criminal or may be married. Who knows? In a word, we shouldn’t expect too much rationality or persistency from the romantic love on the Internet.

解析     这是一篇典型的立场选择型作文,要求考生首先确立一个自己的观点,然后进行论证。
    根据题目要求,文章结构如下:
    第一段提出观点,网恋不可靠。
    第二段用两个理由论证观点,网恋有时不现实,网恋可能具有欺骗性。
    第三段总结概括主题,我们不要指望网恋具有理性和永恒性。
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