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问题     According to a survey on psychological factors in people’s decision to go through plastic surgeries, 34.4% of surgery clients are college students, among whom 60. 3% aim to increase their competitiveness in the job market. What is your view on this? Write an essay of about 400 words.
    In the first part of your essay you should state clearly your main argument, and in the second part you should support your argument with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.
    You should supply an appropriate title for your essay.
    Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
    Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.

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答案 Plastic Surgeries for College Students: Not the Right Choice, Not the Right Time Looking good is the aspiration of everyone, and the college students, who are at their prime time, are surely included. We have long heard that those who are not completely satisfied with their natural look would go under knifes to change how they look. But when college students are joining this trend, accounting for 34.4 percent of all surgeries according to a survey, it still provokes some discussion and debate. I personally do not believe it is a good idea for college students to go through plastic surgeries. When asked about their purpose of doing so, 60.3 percent of the college students claim that they believe a better look means a better opportunity in job-hunting. It is understandable that some students or even their parents would think so. The media’s influence that you have to look good, the fierce competition in the job market and the misleading information spread by clinics are the main driving forces for this phenomenon. The students who are frustrated by the failures in job hunting, the parents who would do whatever to make their children live better and the promotions by many clinics to attract the graduates make surgery something that college graduates and their parents think about and talk about. As for my disapproval of college students having plastic surgeries, the most obvious reason is financial dependence on parents. Putting aside a small proportion of the college students who support or partially support themselves through part-time jobs, expensive clinical procedures paid by parents who have already spent a lot on their tuitions and living expenses are simply not acceptable for the majority of college students. As for the claim that a better prospect is needed in the job market, we have to really evaluate how much importance is attached to one’s appearance in job-hunting. With complicated factors affecting the outcome of a job interview, how can we be sure that appearances make the determining difference? And how can be certain that plastic surgery is the way out? And when we talk about college students, we should be realistic about how mature they are. They may be interested in one trend one day, and change what they like the next day. If plastic surgery is done, who is to guarantee that what they get from a procedure is what they really want and need for the rest of their life? Failure to get the desirable result is frustrating enough already, and when we think about the risks involved, there are simply more reasons why this is not such a good idea. To sum up, looking good is not the deciding factor in job hunting. And even for those who really want to have a plastic surgery, before graduation is not the time yet.

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