For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter to the Mayor about the Renovation of the Old City. You should write

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write A Letter to the Mayor about the Renovation of the Old City. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:
假设你是刘梅,请你就本市某些开发商无计划拆除旧建筑,改造城区的现象给市长写一封信,内容应涉及进行城区改造的必要性、没有计划地拆除旧建筑的危害,以及你本人的观点和建议。

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答案 【1】Aug. 28th, 2005 Dear Mr. Mayor, 【2】I’m a citizen who has been living here for over 50 years. I’m writing to express my views on the problem of demolition in our city. 【3】The controversial issue often brought into the limelight is that 【4】whether we should promote urbanization or preserve the old buildings. 【5】Personally, I think the preservation of ancient houses is of great importance to our modern lives. 【6】First and foremost, 【7】the old buildings should be cherished 【8】because they embody the Chinese architectural culture, 【9】and they are the treasures of the world at large. 【10】Moreover, these ancient buildings may be attractive scenic spots for foreigners. Therefore, 【11】it would be better if you conduct careful evaluation of the buildings be forehand in order to avoid unplanned demolition. 【12】Thank you for your attention. 【13】And my suggestion is open to any honest objection. Best regards. 【14】Yours faithfully, Lin Mei

解析     【1】【2】【3】【12】【14】缩进式格式:
     1.先写日期,日期靠右
     2.每段段首缩进四个英文字母
     3.结束敬语写在正文下面一两行处的右侧
     4.署名写在结束敬语下面一至二行,要从结束敬语的中部写起
    【2】开头部分自我介绍,并用I’m writing to do明确写信目的。
    【3】用The controversial issue often brought into the limelight引出有争议的现象。
    【5】用Personally,I think引出个人观点和建议。
    【6】【10】用递进手法阐明利害关系,层次分明。
    【11】用it would be better if you礼貌地提出建议。
    【12】【13】典型的建议信结尾的写法:先感谢对方的关注,再以委婉的语气期盼回复。
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