Recently, a lot of people are troubled by fake commodities and are furious with the production and sale of fake commodities. Wha

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问题     Recently, a lot of people are troubled by fake commodities and are furious with the production and sale of fake commodities. What harms do fake commodities do to producers and consumers and how can we cope with the problem?
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    The Harmfulness of Fake Commodities
    You are to write in three parts.
    In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
    In the second part, provide reasons to support your opinion.
    In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

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答案 Nowadays fake commodities have almost found their way into every field. They bring a lot of harms to producers and consumers, and sometimes they even prove to be dangerous to people’s lives. Firstly, compared with the genuine products, fake commodities attract more consumers because of their much lower prices. This, of course, causes great economic losses to the real manufacturers since fake commodities damage the credibility of the genuine products. Secondly, fake commodities also harm consumer’s interests. For example, consumers cannot enjoy the free after-sale services provided by the genuine-product manufacturers if something goes wrong with the fake commodities. Thirdly, fake commodities can even threaten people’s lives. It is reported for example that some consumers died after drinking fake wine. Therefore fake commodities are a serious problem in our country. We should make every effort to solve it. The legitimate producers should safeguard their legal rights by powerful precautions and, at the same time, try to upgrade products and cut prices so as to attract more consumers. The authorities should redouble their efforts to punish the production and sale of fake commodities. In addition, consumers should resist the temptation of the cheaper fake commodities and create no opportunities for them.

解析     这是一篇典型的给定观点型作文,要求考生以给定的观点作为中心思想(论点)进行论证。
    根据题目要求,文章结构如下:
    第一段提出观点,假冒商品给制造商和消费者都带来损失,有时甚至危及人们的生命。
    第二段用三个理由论证观点,假冒商品损害产品信誉,给制造商带来经济损失。假冒商品损害消费者利益。假冒商品有时甚至危及人们的生命。
    第三段总结引申主题。假冒商品是严重的社会问题,政府、制造商和消费者要采取相应的措施,杜绝假冒商品的生产和出售。
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