The Short-sighted Students Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe t

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问题     The Short-sighted Students
    Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
    1) describe the drawing briefly,
    2) explain its intended meaning, and
    3) give your comments.
   

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答案 In the picture, a teacher is questioning his students: "How come all of you come to the front of the classroom?" His students, all bespectacled and with books piled up on their desks, answer with one voice: "We can’t see the blackboard clearly in the back!" This picture is telling us how schooling has done harm to students. Specifically, long hours of study and heavy workload have impaired their eyesight and probably caused other physical problems. There is no doubt that China’s primary and junior schooling is very effective. A student in Grade 8 can solve some math problems that are only learned in universities in the West. Sadly, this achievement comes with a price: the physical well-being of students is damaged. With years of commitment to their studies, many students are very short-sighted. Occupied by mountains of homework, some students are even unable to finish a 1000-meter race, because of the lack of physical exercise. To address this problem, I think it is necessary for schools to reduce students’ study load, by cutting their homework and tests. We should let them enjoy some valuable free time and experience more things outside classroom. This will ultimately be beneficial to their eyesight and horizons.

解析     这幅图片刻画了一群学生簇拥着围到黑板前。他们都带着眼镜还嚷着“坐在后面看不见”。可见,学习的负担孩子们的视力不小的损害。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可安排如下:
    第一段描绘图片,并指出图片的意图:学习的负担对学生造成了身体伤害。
    第二段提出个人看法:繁重的学业负担,占用了学生的锻炼时间。
    第三段提出建议:学校为学生减负,还学生一个健康的身体。
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