Should young people continue to live with their parents after finding a job? This issue has been intensely discussed for years.

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问题     Should young people continue to live with their parents after finding a job? This issue has been intensely discussed for years. The following are the supporters’ and opponents’ opinions. Read carefully the opinions from both sides and write your response in about 200 words, in which you should first summarize briefly the opinions from both sides and then give your view on the issue.
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    Yes:
    It is widely acknowledged that living with parents contributes to relieving young adults’ strains and stresses. They bear great pressure of work and life, and it is not easy for them to adapt to an independent life. Parents, especially those who have retired, are always ready to provide help for their children, so that they can concentrate on their work.
    When it comes to interpersonal relationship and career development, young people can get great help and lots of guidance from their parents because they definitely have more experience.
    Young people are more likely to live a regular and healthy life with sufficient care from their parents.
    No:
    The family relationship might become even worse under the subtle influence of the generation gap. Parents and children usually have different life concepts and habits.
    Young people are unaware that they might lose independence when living with their parents. Washing clothes, tidying up rooms and tackling tricky problems by the young themselves are the basic life abilities they need for their future life.
    Another drawback of living under the same roof with parents is that one might live a parasitic life and lose his motivation. In stark contrast, those who prefer to live on their own could develop their interpersonal relationship, money management skills, and adaptability.

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答案 Should Young People Continue to Live with Their Parents After Finding a Job? In recent years, due to the increasing unemployment rate, more and more young adults have joined "the boomerang kid" rank. Nevertheless, some of them lean too heavily on their parents and lose their independence. Therefore, it has been proposed that instead of sharing the same house with parents to alleviate the economic pressure, young people should live by themselves to avoid conflicts with their parents. From my point of view, young people indeed should develop their abilities of living independently, but I’m still supportive of the view that those workplace newbies had better live with their parents. To start with, moving into the job market indicates that they are mature enough to support their elderly parents, most of whom are retired or semi-retired. Living together with their parents ensures that they can take better care of their parents by paying attention to their health problems in time and satisfying their emotional needs. Furthermore, as new comers in the workplace, young people can get lots of constructive suggestions and advisable guidance from their parents, which can help them meet various challenges. To summarize, youngsters should be encouraged to live with their parents in order to strengthen the family tie, but it doesn’t mean they should rely on their parents for a living.

解析     本题讨论的是年轻人在上班之后是否应该继续和父母同住。在具体行文方面,考生应首先简要概述正反双方的观点:正方认为,与父母同住可以减轻年轻人的压力,使他们更好地工作;反方认为,与父母同住会使其慢慢丧失独立生存的能力。然后给出自己的观点:年轻人自己住的确能够培养独立生活的能力,但仍支持职场新人最好和父母同住。最后总结全文,重申观点。
    开头部分阐述背景并概述正反双方的观点。正方观点:为了减轻经济压力,年轻人在找到工作之后还应该继续和父母同住。反方观点:为了避免与父母产生矛盾,年轻人在找到工作之后不应该继续和父母同住。
    中间部分通过"From my point of view…”阐述自己的观点:年轻人确实应该培养独立生活的能力,但仍支持职场新人最好和父母同住。并用“To start with…”和“Furthermore…”阐述理由:年轻人在找到工作之后应该开始赡养父母,而且同住能让年轻人更好地照顾父母;作为职场新人,年轻人可以从父母那里得到许多有益的建议和指导,以便应对各种挑战。
    结尾部分通过“To summarize…”总结全文,鼓励年轻人与父母同住,但不应依赖父母生存。
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