Below is a picture showing the improvement of the air quality in your city between 1998 and 2008. Look at the graph and write an

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问题    Below is a picture showing the improvement of the air quality in your city between 1998 and 2008. Look at the graph and write an essay of about 120 words making reference to the following points:
   1. a description of the graph;
   2. the cause and effect of it.

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答案 Our city started the Blue Sky Project in 1998, when it saw only 100 days of blue skies but 141 heavily polluted days. With the efforts of the government and citizens over these years, the air condition of the city has gradually improved. The number of blue skies climbed to 229 in 2004 while the heavily polluted days were greatly reduced to 17. The progress continued each year with an increase of 5—7 good days and decrease of 8—12 bad air days until the end of 2007, though there was an exception in 2006 with 24 days heavily polluted. The changing numbers are due to the fact that people become more and more aware of the environment around them. In addition, the government has continued with its measures. Air quality monitoring, traffic control and tree planting are just some of the ways to improve the conditions.We believe that the city will see more blue skies and fewer air-polluted days in the future and the people will be able to enjoy their life better.

解析    第一步:审题
   1. 题型:图表作文
   2. 文体:论述说明文
   第二步:框架分析
   1.说明图示内容,点出每个要点;
   2.图示现象发生的原因和影响。
   第三步:列出写作思路
   1.简明扼要的描述图示的主要内容:总体而言,城市的空气质量提高了;
   2.重点描述图示内容:对每一年的好天气、重度污染天气天数进行描述、比较;
   3.分析原因:人们越来越关注环境,政府采取措施等;
   4.表示自己的愿望或者发出倡议:只要人们不断努力,加大保护力度,环境会越来越好。
   第四步:列出关键词和词组
   with the efforts of; gradually improve; climb to; reduce to; exception; due to the fact that; be aware of, etc.
   第五步:落笔成文
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