Read carefully the following excerpt on parents’ highly interest in sharing their children’s photos online, and then write your

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问题     Read carefully the following excerpt on parents’ highly interest in sharing their children’s photos online, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:
    - summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then
    - give your comment on sharenting.
    You should support yourself with information from the excerpt.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
    Sharenting? Be Cautious
    As social media adoption rates continue to increase around the world, many young parents are keen on posting photos of their children—sometimes on a daily basis—on social networking platforms. In fact, parents sharing cute faces of their children to relatives and friends online even have its own word: "sharenting."
    However, oversharing can be dangerous. Recently, the police suggested parents stop sharing photos of their kids online, in order to protect their children’s privacy and avoid child-related crimes. One of the dangers is that abductors or kidnappers may track a kid from a picture’s background, which may threaten the child’s safety. Another is that kids’ photos will be stolen and sold to intermediary agencies, for commercial purposes.
    "On Weibo, there are some unscrupulous businessmen putting stolen photos on forged search notices for ill-gotten gains," said Zhao, a lawyer with the Beijing Juvenile Legal Aid and Research Center. Even worse, faces, heads or other body parts in the photos might be photo-shopped onto pornography and spread on illegal websites.
    Some netizens believe, however, that it is unnecessary to refrain from posting pictures of children altogether. That’s "because no one should feel restricted from participating in what is now a very common way of life," she said, adding, "Social media is meant to be a portrayal of one’s life."

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答案 Parents Should Not Do Sharenting Nowadays, many parents derive pleasure from sharing photos of their children on social networking platforms, but oversharing can be hazardous. For one thing, it arouses the attention of abductors or kidnappers. For another, some intermediary agencies may steal the pictures for commercial usages. Some netizens believe that social media sharing has already become a part of one’s life, but a lawyer warns that these photos may be photo-shopped onto pornography or used for ill-gotten gains. In my opinion, parents had better not share their children’s photos on social networking platforms. To begin with, apart from being the target of abductors or kidnappers, these photos might also become the target of criticism. Some abhorrent remarks may be imprinted in the children’s mind and inflicts on them irreversibly psychological damage. Besides, sharenting may affect children’s school lives. A child can easily be singled out as the target of mockery if his parents post photos of his foolishness; this inevitably leads to his self-abasement, or even worse, a lack of will for school. Furthermore, sharenting can put at risk not only one’s own children, but also other children. A group photo, for example, can give a train of lead to the kidnappers to stalk these children. In conclusion, I believe parents had better not post the photos of their children on social networking platforms.

解析     本题的主旨是讨论父母是否应该上传孩子照片到社交网站上。首先应当总结概括材料中内容,再给出自己的观点。文章结构可安排如下:
    第一段:简要概括材料内容,提出自己的看法——父母不应该把孩子的照片上传到社交网站上。
    第二段:分三点铺陈论述自己的观点。首先,这一做法不仅让孩子成为了绑匪的目标,也把自己的孩子推到批评的风口浪尖。再者,这种做法有可能会影响到孩子的校园生活。更甚地,这一做法危及的不仅仅是这些家长自己孩子的人身安全,而且也置其他孩子于危险之中。
    第三段:总结全文,重申观点——父母不应该把孩子的照片上传到社交网站上。
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